Which revision of the final sentence best achieves Jan’s purpose? Repeating the word “flourish” creates a positive tone and achieves the purpose of bringing “dignity and respect to women.”
Mentioning families and communities conveys inclusivity and achieves the purpose of bringing “dignity and respect to women.”
By repeating the phrases “if women” and “families will flourish,” Clinton uses parallelism to clarify whom she wants to help.
Clinton’s use of parallelism and repetition of the word “flourish” underscores the power of women’s rights to build a better world for everyone.